her eyes are like beads
lifeless and cold
her face is like porcelain
broken and old
her hair is like flax
moldy yet golden
her dress is like gauze
mossy and broken
her cheeks are pale
lips shining like rubies
she cries through the dark
if only if only
the trees parade
in masquerade
their branches in mid-sway
the creepers creep
and loved ones weep
yet no tears
seep from their eyes
as they are laid
goodbyes are bade
the night no longer night
say goodbye for them
from me
while their faces
bask in blight
(I removed some of them)
Hahaha, I hope you enjoyed my crappy poems. If your in a good mood, consider rating them for me and putting it in the comments. I love knowing what I can improve on...




3 comments:
9/10
caseeey that was really good!!!
your rythym was a wee bit off
yeah, I noticed that too.
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